1)
Why does the Torah add the words "Daber el B'nei Yisrael"?
1.
Menachos, 61b: To preclude Nochrim and women from the Din of Tenufah. 1
1
See Torah Temimah in Vayikra, 1:2 note 2.
2)
Why does the Pasuk need to say that the owner should bring his Shelamim to Hashem?
1.
Targum Yonasan: The Torah is teaching us that he should bring his Korban himself and not via a Shali'ach. 1
2.
Menachos, 61b: Having written "Daber el B'nei Yisrael" (refer to 7:29:0.1:1) "ha'Makriv es Zevach Shelamav" is coming to incorporate Geirim and Avadim Meshuchrarim in the Din of Tenufah.
1
In order to perform the Tenufah (See Na'ar Yonasan).